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still taste burning, streaming, smooth
tears on their downward spiral
making way for those to come
ripping organs through throat

the taste of kisses
still warm on lips
the scent of skin
still warm in air

to want, to have, to keep
the last will never be
the empty, the loss, the gain
the last will never be

the heart still keens
the soul still weeps
the bosom still heaves
as drops fall, as drops pool

a lesson learned, the hard way
a teacher turned, from pupil
a message gained, from messenger
a messenger slaughtered, for truths

forgive, remember, understand
let go, reach, teach
depart, discover, return
just don't ever forget your lover

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a story I wrote about a year ago. I have a ninja fetish. Sci-Fi and Ninjas seems good to me :D

I used an odd point of view for writing, which I think is actually better than the usual "she smiled at him, and he smiled back" cause it allows for a freer look at the world.
anyway.
I had to add the beginning bit for world-reference, it's still a bit rough. any advice about it would be awesome!

=^.^=

the [1] [2] and [3] are footnotes, waaay at the bottom of the page
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Murder in the City Nina leaned forward, her foot tapping rapidly on the plush red carpet beneath the cozy table she shared with her boyfriend.
Tom glanced at Nina, tilting his head to one side and raising a brow.
"You're tapping again, Darling. Is something bothering you?"
She lifted her gaze, then quickly focused on her food again. "What makes you think something is bothering me?"
Her bottom lip found its way between her teeth, as she rearranged her mashed potatos.
"I thought the potatos looked better on the other side, to be honest. Maybe you could add some of my peas as decoration."
Abruptly Nina straightened, her fork clattering on her plate as she gMurder in the City by ~lorikitty
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